Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.
Give reasons for your answer.
You should write at least 250 words.
Certain individual opines that demerits of owning a car outweighs the merits. In my opinion, I do believe that having a car offers innumerable benefits in people lives.
People now-a-days travel from one place to other through the use of their own personal vehicles. With the excessive use of vehicles on roads causes the issue of traffic jams on roads. As a result people have to spend many hours on road to travel from work to home and from home to work. People suffer a lot of stress and depression problems thus affecting their health. Moreover, vehicles release harmful air pollutants such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen oxide which causes air pollution. The degradation of the environment and lowering the quality of breathable air causes people suffer from many health issues such as asthma and cardiovascular problems. To exemplify, Delhi suffers a major problem of traffic jams because of excessive use of personal vehicles.
However, the use of cars is very advantageous as it makes travel easier for people. They do not have waste their time standing in long queues waiting for public transportation. They can travel any time and from any place. Furthermore, cars make transportation of good and products trouble-free thus providing support in the sales and profits of business. Additionally, it also helps in increasing the employment opportunities as in present time many organisations accept candidates who have a driving licences and cars. To elucidate, if a person has to go for some emergency in the middle of the night, he or she can travel through his or her car
To conclude, I vehemently agree that having a car offers countless advantage to people and makes their life much more convenient and uncomplicated. The can cover large distances and can even travel from one state to another in their own personal vehicle.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05901639344 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87777348316 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7366755189 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143886743513 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484581083518 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559443429379 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10489695703 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432859385984 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.