Some people prefer to live in a house ,while other feel that there are more advantage to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantage than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
The growth in urban populations shows that people tend to live in apartment instead of house.On the otherhands,there are many who still prefer to live in house.Nowadays,Houses build so lux with big yard that those are suitable for some rich men to show off in front of other.In subsequent paragraph more explaination will be provided .
House usually have yard with friendly envioronment where children can play all the time in safe place.In addition,Selecting house as a place for living is a brelent chose from special people wanting to have less noise and enjoy better privacy.Normally,those kind of person want to boost the quality of their life and they are willing to have a positive attitude towards world role.
However,some people prefer to live in apartement.Clearly,the crucial reasons are safety and less cost of utilty bills.Although neighbour keep an eye on each other’s residents,they have good feeling and get together in special occasion.Besides,most of apartenemt install CCTV for more control on persons entering in the apartment all days and all nights.
In conclution,I personally value privacy and silence in compare with other factors when I want to chose somewhere to accommodate.To be more clear,I belive the best place for living is house with huge and green yard.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, still, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33009708738 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67813409861 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.0209926508 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 274.5 106.682146367 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317932650632 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187469262312 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499725371383 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187469262312 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499725371383 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.4 13.0946893788 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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