Although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspaper will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
In contemporary society, owing to the fact that reading the news on the internet
is being very popular, there are many who argued that newspaper will continue
the major source of news. In my point of view, I completely disagree with this
phenomenom.
There are two main reasons to explain for this situation. First of all, reading news
based on the internet is more convenient. With the innovation of technology
devices, people do not have to buy daily newspapers in the bookstore in order to
read the news. they can easily just stay and search for the news on google as well
as online news applications. Despite the fact that it seems arduous for elderly to
get on well with technology devices, they will be taught by the young, who know
how to use very straightforward.
Secondly, online news is not only various but also almost free. The content on
newspaper is limited because of the quantity of pages each newspaper as well as
the majority of each type of newspaper, meanwhile, people sometimes do not
have enough news that they want. Moreover, in the past, if they wanted to look
for some kinds of news, they would have to purchase not only one newspaper
everyday, but up to now, the world is living in 4.0 industry, people can search for
every kinds of news they want for instant sports, movies, education, and so on via
the internet via technology devices which connected to wifi or data.
In conclusion, apart from the merits expressed above, I truly believe that in the
future, reading online news will be the main sources of news for every people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...wspapers in the bookstore in order to read the news. they can easily just stay and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88727272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51964578384 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.051044207 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424713039474 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163029979017 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080156803196 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116864215684 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847477125296 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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