Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Different countries believe that it is important to focus on economic growth, while other people prefer other forms of growth. This essay will discuss the importance of economic growth as compared to other forms of growth. The economy is the backborne of any nation. That is as the economy grows, so do opportunities for employment and income growth. Stronger labour markets and higher income levels tend to help those families living in poverty move above poverty threshold. Furthermore, economic growth will help social problems, such as crime rate, communicable disease and improvements of life expectancy of people.
The strenghth of an economy lead to a health nation. Whilst a crippling economy is a distress to the citizens, as well as the governments. Therefore, growth in the economy brings relief and mental stability. For example, people living in a struggling economy are at high risk of developing heart attacks or psychiatric conditions due to stressors of the economy.
However, the peace of a nation plays a huge role apart from the economic growth. That is, there are some countries which are well-developed, though they experience civil unrest. It is crucial for the government to focus on increasing growth in security system. For example, recently in America they are people, who were shot dead in the city of New Jersey. This was due to poor security progression in a country with high levels of economic growth.
In conclusion, the benefits of economic growth outweighs the drawbacks of types of progressions. Economic growth is advantageous, as it reduces a number of communicable diseases, increases employment opportunities and economic growth. Which will inturn solve other forms of progression such as social growth, environmental and political growth.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- The chart shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members in all faculties of a major university in 2012. 56
- The graph below shows how prices of 'high-tech gadgets' changed over time in Somecountry. 61
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by a car. 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35460992908 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97589573655 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535460992908 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3867884148 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15495968347 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507100393707 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418641533227 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940663403209 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477186389543 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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