Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money?
What other factors contribute towards happiness?
There is a very popular saying, Money can’t buy you happiness. However, there are people contradicting this view who feel being rich and being happy are directly related. Though money may be important, it is not the only means through which one can stay happy.
Material happiness is often temporary, it is from within that one should feel cherished and lively. This feeling often arises once person feels satisfied in life. Hunger to run towards money will make us run forever in our lives. It is the peace of mind which we should be targeting in order to find actual happiness. There are many instances where a director of a big corporate entity always stays frustrated or angry throughout the day whereas, a normal employee in that same organisation may be happy by being satisfied with whatever he has. This may be due to hunger for earning more, which has pressurised the director so much that he forgets the true purpose of earning money.
Family and friends are also important in our lives, without whom we won’t be able to enjoy. The love and affection that the family gives, motivates us to stay focussed and tackle any problems which may come in our way. Also the support which a true friend can give will be more valuable than any bank balance. There are many instances of rich individuals who even though had lots of money but still end up being depressed because they feel lonely without any true friends and family members. Because of this state of mind many thinks suicide is the only solution and end their lives.
In conclusion, I do feel that the money may be important in promoting happiness however, it is not the only factor. One should be satisfied in life with whatever he has and should never forget that there are other things in life as well like family and friends with whom one can be happy even without too much money.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Also,
...any problems which may come in our way. Also the support which a true friend can giv...
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Message: Comparison is written "as well 'as'".
Suggestion: as
... there are other things in life as well like family and friends with whom one can be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, well, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71036585366 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3556303348 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0125897367 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290648844796 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947747559511 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729091452463 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198821689429 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911764086238 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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