The impact of the internet on privacy.
Discuss and give your opinion.
In modern times, the privacy on the internet has become highly controversial. Some people prefer to maintain their privacy on the internet by avoiding post their personal things, such as pictures, opinions and contact information. While others do not mind to share their personal life on the internet. In this essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide my overall opinion.
Generally speaking, there are a variety reasons why people prefer to keep their personal information away from the internet. Perhaps the main reason is because they think that their information can lead Hackers to be able to access their accounts and use their information against them. By the information, hackers can also have the ability to reach to their Visa card and steal money as much as the hackers can. As a result of this, people may lose all their possessions and their money too. For example, the latest statistics indicate that people who had shared their personal information might be hacked in the rate of 72 per cent.
On the other hand, vast majority of people have no problem to share their personal information on the internet. They think that it is normal to post my pictures and say my opinion on what I agree with and what I do not agree with. Also, some people share their personal information deliberately to obtain followers and fans. For instance, many of famous people posts their pictures and publish their verdicts to make followers which let them to make money by advertising.
In conclusion, privacy on the internet is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of the argument. I tend to believe that personal information should keep away from the internet even though it was a simple information as well as pictures and contact information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ures, opinions and contact information. While others do not mind to share their perso...
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Line 7, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll as pictures and contact information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92358803987 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60903759739 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1517642749 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900549364858 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420583141884 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040130083333 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755615697264 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603219725282 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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