Some people say that the best way to improve public heath is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Declining level of health in the general population is becoming a common problem o modern societies. Some argue that better access to sports facilities can solved this problem, whereas others feel this would not have significant effect on enhanced public health. This essay agrees that provide education at primary school to increase awareness among children will be more beneficial for society rather than better access to sports equipment.
Some people are convinced that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful work are main reasons that physical activity is no longer part of our everyday life. If they were easy-to-reach local sports centres, they would be more likely to do exercise regularly. However, in my opinion people prefer to spend their leisure time in front of a TV screen rather than be active due to lack of awareness how important is being fitness.
Therefore, the better way to enhanced public health is educating as young as children how important is physical activity and healthy diet. Primary school programmes should encourage children to do daily activity. Children need to know how important is everyday movement, even so simple like playing in park with parents or go for a walk. It should become common habit for everyone. Moreover, school should provide healthy diet for children and teach them which products should be eaten more often and which should be avoided. After this kind of education children become healthier and more active as an adults.
In conclusion, focusing on sports equipment is beneficial for people who are already physical actively but would not have significant influence on increasing public health generally. To do that, government through school education should encourage children and young people to do more exercise and healthy lifestyle in general.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-20 | Prabhp | 84 | view |
| 2020-01-11 | syed fasi uddin | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-03 | Ania Pe. | 61 | view |
| 2019-12-01 | vinshu koul | 56 | view |
| 2019-11-24 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 73 | view |
- You cannot got to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer, express you gratitude, explain you like your current job very much. 73
- You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation. Tell them where you would like to live. Tell them the type of place you are looking for. 56
- you have just spent a weekend at a friend's house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containig some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what coat look like, whe 73
- You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the good 73
- You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had, and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 602, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...ren become healthier and more active as an adults. In conclusion, focusing on sports...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, even so, in conclusion, in general, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61604959347 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.996079952 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149028828024 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560110299663 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721443667781 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107086842804 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584885865727 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.