Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of enviorment pollution alarming to managed by government which was debatable has now become more controversial with many masses claming that it is benefical for health. While others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years . In my opinion ,the former proposition appears to the more rational . This essay further elaborate agree effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion .
These are myraid of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most prepondent one stems from thw fact that enviorment is very important for living on earth. Good enviorment is better for staying healthy. Government should take some steps to save enviorment from pollution. for instance, awareness the rural area peoples
There are many reasons to goverment save the enviorment, firstly goverment have authority to change and control everything. Goverment should make new law fusil fuels vehicles are banned only allow the LPG and CNG vehicles and banned pressure horn.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the the benefit of our health Government should make new laws, which is related to save enviorment.for instance grow some plants, banned pressure horn, aware illitrate people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 5.75862068966 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75200679594 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661904761905 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9329737293 50.4703680194 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.363636364 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.061092272794 0.242375264174 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211071079901 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304191817103 0.071462118173 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340943638083 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206260512442 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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