With computers and Internet, people can study and work without going to school or company.Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Nowadays.Internet studying is attracting people’s attention.The issue about whether school is not important and students will study well in Internet has been discussed heatedly in fast-paced society.In my opinion,I disagree with this claim and I will present my reason in the following essay.
Admittedly,Internet studying is beneficial to students and it can make students study more efficiently.Firstly,it is time-saving for students to study at home through the Internet.More specifically,students don’t spend a lot of time on the journey every day. So pupil through Internet is efficiently every day.Secondly,students can study wider range of knowledge through Internet,which mean that students don’t need spend a lot of time to talk with classmates.I think this way is time-saving.
However,from my perspective,school is more important for students.In the first place,students can discuss some problems with their classmates.It can not only help them solve problem,but also increase friendship.Beside teacher can provide professional knowledge and scientific teaching system.That is to say students can get knowledge more easily and relaxed.Lastly,students can improve their social skill and face to face skill,which mean that they can find job easily in the future.
In conclusion,although benefits brought by study in school is obvious,Internet studying stills plsys a significant role in our daily lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the first place, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12315270936 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.31055594135 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.562871321 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.6 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.6 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 31.2 7.06120827912 442% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235495681441 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135188362543 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0143245876836 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142093805294 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114751232003 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.1 12.4159519038 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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