You forget your bag in the gym and gym management announced that the gym will be closed for a week for some renovation work. You need your bag as it has important things in it.
Write a letter to the manager of the gym. In your letter
introduce yourself and describe your position
give them a description of your bag
tell them what you want them to do
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to inform you that yesterday while leaving the gym in hurry it slipped from my mind to collect my bag from the locker room.
My name is Jacob Carlos and I have been a member of Gold gym since past 2 years. Yesterday evening when I was training in the gym, I got an urgent call from my home and in hurry I forgot to collect the bag from the locker room.
The bag contains some very important reports from my office which I need to submit urgently.
Although I know that the gym will be closed for next 1 week for renovations, I want your help in recovering the bag at the earliest. My bag is navy blue in colour with brand name American Tourister engrossed in the front. It has 2 compartments and a side pouch.
Once you find the bag, I request you to call on my registered mobile number so that I can come along and collect the same. As the documents in the bag are of top most priority for me, I will highly appreciate a quick response on this.
Hope you will consider my request and do the needful at the earliest.
Thanks and regards
Jacob Carlos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34928229665 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31103945609 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588516746411 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6589238947 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 4.34317383033 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290404952806 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998285260057 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908394680858 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144951350034 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618068032295 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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