University should be allocate the same amount of money to student s sports as they allocate to their libarier ?agree?
It is irrefutable debate that university must given the money to children for sports activities as they are likely to be spend on the library .I m agree in this statement.I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark upon, university must given the money to the learn for playing sports because it helps for staying fit and healthy to them.In addition to, if student pay more attention to their games so they would grow their muscles strength and increase mentally power.for example , football and cricket games are helped the children to become healthy.
To furthurmore,teacher should motivate to the children so they can participate in various games such as basketball,skating and boxing. In these games help the children to reduce crime in the society as well as they far from the drug addiction.so they can develop their interest towards games.
To conclude up, sports activities must be in the children s lifes so university should spend money sports as they are likely to be spend in the library.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98850574713 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88973411671 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 176.041082164 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591954022989 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.143919539 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 173.6 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254430247855 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143325722585 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666201486235 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164955144005 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583239685393 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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