Among high speed technology gears and also in today’s machinery life, it is very important to stop getting lost in track of the time and forget nourishing our soul with happiness.
People need happiness for continuing their life and be prosperous in other aspects of their personal and social life. We are not robots with artificial intelligence to perform our duties regularly and in a non-stop way. Human-kinds, despite of other creatures have social life and without soul nourishment, they won’t be able to do their duties properly in every field of their life. In my opinion, happiness is the most important part of the soul nourishment and for having a prosperous life it has very fundamental role. By being happy your body, would release adrenaline and you would be able to make great decisions, you would be able to control yourself when you are anxious and you would be able to inject kindness to your partner, friend, family and people around you. All in all, your behavior would affect other people around you and you will be able to see their admiration and will shape your personality during the time.
There are many people around us from different social categories with different opinions and life style. So, we are not able to have an accurate definition for happiness. For a worker daddy buying a chocolate for his children makes him happy and in the other side for s business man buying a luxurious car for himself makes him happy. Some families by living in a lux house feel happy and for another one happening a healing for a family member in hospital causes happiness.
Willingly or unwillingly, the way of our life would affect our way of achieving happiness. But, we should always remember that, we must search happiness in ourselves and think about what make us to have self-steam. We should learn respect to ourselves and avoid comparing our way of living with each other. The key for happiness is to not ignore ourselves and be kind with ourselves at first.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a non-stop way" with adverb for "non-stop"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nce to perform our duties regularly and in a non-stop way. Human-kinds, despite of other creature...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83965014577 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60069094679 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524781341108 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.342876715 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185017325225 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066227344066 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455427877927 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105604645611 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02555155398 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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