Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the modern era, the impact and role of celebrities are no secrets for anyone. Every person is inclined toward following his/her popular artist or athletes. A controversial question among people is whether the importance of them is more for younger people or older people. There are various opinions about this issue and different people state diverse ideas. From my perspective, their importance undoubtedly is more and considerable for young people. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate cogently on my points of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the personality of older people is formed. Hence, they put less under the influence of famous people. Indeed, their life includes more obsessions and difficulties in comparison to younger. To take a personal experience as an example, my grandmother always told us that we did this works and when we were young obeying them the celebrities of that time but now we are not interested in it because we understand life better compared to the young period.
Another equally noteworthy point in corroborating this issue is that juveniles try by imitating them to be like their idols, to clarify it more, they want to seem similar to them and attract the attention. Without a shadow of a doubt, if they were busy or had a valuable goal, they would not follow them. Moreover, they think not only does it bring popularity for them but also they appear more fashionable. According to the study on this topic, the results revealed the greater importance of it for younger people is to be shown up-to-date. Apart from this, the younger people's style is influenced by advertising the goods by celebrities and in this way they affect the behavior or style of a younger. To exemplify, using some fake jewelry was increased among the youths who follow that artist.
To wrap it up, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that celebrities are more desirable for youths, and they are going to indicate to other peers or society they knew about the recent events and famous people of the world or domestic persons. It anticipated enhancing as more attaching to social networks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9696969697 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77312103499 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556473829201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2152899887 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22316359541 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731195069262 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472484643195 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13529854349 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384608543017 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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