Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to my unconcerned request that has been done about 4 weeks ago. I had bought a toast machine, once I got it, I realize that it was not working as properly as it was supposed to. Although I let your company know about the situation, none of the solutions advised or done. Could you kindly consider my situation favorably?
Let me put a finer point on it. The first time I took the machine of from its package, the appearance of the machine was looking well. When I plugged it on, unfortunately, the signal light did not turn on. A moment I thought that it is because the light is broken, whereas the heating system was not running. Directly I called your customer services and they informed me about the situation and they ask me to wait for a return call from the technical service, no one ever did.
Would you kindly replace the devices? Unless it has different properties, I can accept other brands as well. I can be contacted with the address given in the form filled in your place. A swift response would be appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Erman DURAN
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to my unconcern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, well, whereas, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52736318408 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52125441863 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1757482586 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157968829677 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468406805897 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354587152868 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913552560106 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170029128208 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.