It is often argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job and career settlement is not a wide choice. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. However, the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. So, this essay will further elaborate my views for favoring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
To embark with, there are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that students are not able to concentrate in their studies due to varying responsibilities. Another pivotal aspect of this trend is that there is a more responsibility for students. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
Elaborating my viewpoint, there are some merits but one of the crucial effects is that there is increase in average expenditure of a family which ultimately puts more burden on an individual. Besides, individuals have no time to spare for their family members which may leads to weakening of bondage among members. Hence, it is apparent why many are against of this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, may, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07339449541 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81861977862 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628440366972 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4899992247 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0678256660607 0.242375264174 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0221500134306 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664500402918 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396635302786 0.151781067708 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560927024517 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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