People often do not interact with their neighbours and this is harming community building. What are the possible causes and solutions?
In modern life humans can survive only create a social group from close people are lived around them, that can be destroyed without positive communicating between themself. This is mainly because people need a safe place where can have rest, getting help from others and express himself.
The two main possible causes that can make damage to the community are busy lifestyle and independence. Lifestyle quality directly independent of graduate and income, that costs him a lot of time out home. For example, doctors have an extra salary in the world, however, they have to eat and sleep in a hospital because their time equals the saved human lives. The second important factor that contributes to the deteriorating of the rallying neighbors is a wish to be independent, that means be capable to solve any problem by self. For instance, a successful actor have huge money that gives him an opportunity to pay off any service. There are two effective solutions to the problem of destroying society group.
One way to downshift lifestyle for busy people that give time for social life. For example, some companies approve flexible work hours with the same salary. Another method of dealing with young individuals who can get a habit to interconnect with other members of society by benefits from the community. As an example, such a bonus can be a part-time job is getting from eighbours or a church.
To conclude, the community building is harmed even just stop interacting between neighbors include communicate, help and develop the social links. If you would like to have safety neighborhood and positive space for bringing up children you must grow up your street band.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04659498208 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65920353119 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0803752169 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120041666183 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397604556647 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407465859595 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650982243118 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00414735293284 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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