Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
It is agrued by some that a variety of air tickets, groceries and books has been purchased popularity on the website. In my opinion, I do claim that benefit of e-shopping outweigh the drawbacks of it.
On the one hand, online shopping has many negative impacts. Firstly , customer cannot find the pleasure as well as traditional shopping. To be specific, while shopping at store allowed customers to understand every single detail of the good, online shopping need a few clicks to buy them. As a result, shopping on the Internet just show the product details in words and consumers could not feel it. Secondly, these days, there is an increase in the number of online scammers. This means the consumer need to authentic the suppliers so they would not got scammed by fake deal or low-quality products such as fake books or expired groceries while purchasing on the website.
On the other hand, purchasing goods on software programs brings many positive for the users. First of all, instead of spending time for traveling from home to the store to purchases air tickets , books and groceries , online shopping allowed customers lying on their bed and simply purchases them then being delivered right in front of their house. It is convenience and help the users save a plenty of time. Furthermore, internet shopping provides the price tag to the customer first so they can easily plan for something bigger. This mean if purchasers want to buy air tickets, their finance would be collected for entire trip after buying flight ticket.
In conclusion, I hang a notion that buying goods over the Internet have many adverse effects such as scam deal and shopping pleasure, yet the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93771626298 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.571739957 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59169550173 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8298388151 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226867524815 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713263871352 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543770073146 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149904097677 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340843580231 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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