In some countries, criminal trials are shown on television for the public. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
it is a well-established fact that general public could be likely to watch criminal trials on the tv. In my opinion, the drawbacks outweigh the advantages and my viewpoint will be elucidated in this essay.
First of all, when criminal trials are shown on the tv, everyone has more carefull and they will talk to people around them to avoid it. Not only could protect yourself but also your family are protected. In addition, students who are studying laws may gain more experiences when they watch this trials. However, some deem that this create a wide range of deleterious. children tent to have calamitous impact on their behaviour and couldn't control they feelings. Example, one month ago, my neighbor had a young theft about 12 years old and he stole a laptop. After that, when the police asked him why he wanted it, he replied: 'I watched a movie on tv and I thought I might took something like he'. Therefore, he is a kid, he doesn't know it is illegal, he just copy their behaviours. What I mean is the way government warn to us. Because of children will observe and imitate criminal acts. The program on television was made by our taxes and I think our money should be likely to spend on education to alleviate the crimes in our society. Undeniable, that trials have two-faced, sometimes it is good but in another situation, robbery was caused by criminal trials. Moreover, parents should teach children about the fundamental knowledge, it helps them to manage themselves.
In conclusion, criminal programs parties play vital roles in the digital era. Thus, you should select the information on the television or mass media to do the right things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, i mean, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7972027972 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66266489471 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643356643357 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0739261365 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7058823529 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157668400092 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423598198017 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467651464699 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117525485431 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335427789901 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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