In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
In the world, there are many people who prefer eating so much junk food and having health problems from it. It is often argued that the government should increase the tax fee on that type of food. I completely agree with this statement and shall give my reasons below.
First of all, I think that authority should rise the prices of unhealthy food. Even if the costs get expensive the people will not effort to pay for it and they will be obligated to buy another meal. While it is cheap it attracts people attention. For example, in a small region of Sweden government decided to do an experiment in this area and climbed the fast food's fee, so they observed how people change their taste and began to eat healthier. That is why it is possible to deal with this problem in this way.
On the other hand, the state should punish those restaurants and require to not sell junk food. If they cook a healthy dish instead of an unhealthy meal when person is hungry and comes there for eating so then he or she shall have to order it. For instance, most of the villages in my country there are not many fast food places and citizens eat healthy food mostly, so they have more strong body than big cities population. Thus, it is crucial to not ignore this issue.
To conclude, I believe that to deal with this problem governments have to impose a higher tax on this kind of food and should abuse the restaurants which sell fast food.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will be obligated to buy another meal. While it is cheap it attracts people attentio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... so they have more strong body than big cities population. Thus, it is crucial to not ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20796620993 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0095993495 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387363829817 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124388393307 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919628128402 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25378336974 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06076176838 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will be obligated to buy another meal. While it is cheap it attracts people attentio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... so they have more strong body than big cities population. Thus, it is crucial to not ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41666666667 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20796620993 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0095993495 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387363829817 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124388393307 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919628128402 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25378336974 0.151304729494 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06076176838 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.