Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
The ever increasing use of technology may be reducing the opportunities for human interaction yet also providing with different innovative ways to communicate and connect with one another. The ambiguous role of technology is basically changing the way human interacts with each other. Both the believe on the role of technology is partly correct as people's thought on anything new like technology will have mixed idea on its application.
The new era of technology is taking over any other mean of communication through its ubiquitous advancement. The traditional approach of human communication like meeting physically and talking while being present with minimum distance has changed as there are innovative ways of interacting while being present not physically but virtually. human interact with each other through social medial, video call, text or email which does not make the interaction any less.
For example, Facebook is the latest medium of being connected through internet which has myriad of perquisites. from being connected to an old friend to meeting someone new with similar interest to being present in each others lives by liking and commenting to each others posts, human interaction has increased to a wider range. Linkedin is connecting the professionals while instagram is connecting the latest activities of human with just one click of finger. Messenger is keeping human just one text away from each other while a video call is connecting the loved ones living far away within a moment.
As the world has become faster than ever and human has become more restricted with their time, connecting with other human must be anything but time-consuming. In this era, nobody would travel hours hampering their busy schedules to meet a friend rather would make a call in any exigent situation. technology is making the required change with the advancing world with its innovative medium of communication.
In a nut shell, although too much use of technology may lead to some reduction of human interaction if not utilized effectively, it is technology which is making communication easier and better in this fast forwarding world. technology is, indeed, a blessing that is making our life better with its innovations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3025210084 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90431482558 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526610644258 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5853777726 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.2 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449949797344 0.243740707755 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155856789635 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964114010335 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257696505493 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127684594398 0.0667264976115 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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