Essay topics:
you lost something and someone return it
why it is important for you
what is in this
Dear sir,
my name is Rajni and I am writing this letter to convey thanks for your kind act. I really appreciate that you considered lost bag important and return me. Actually last week, I visited in jaipur for my interview as a programmer. this is my first job offer after completing my study. i was completely stranger for this city and did not know anything about places and people. after boarding i hired a private auto for particular address and suddenly his auto out of working between the way. this was annoying me because I was already late for my interview. immediately i booked an another auto in hurry and forgot my bag on previous one. when i reached office than i realized what happen with me. I was totally disappointed and felt dimulative.
but by god grace my manager cooperate with me and hired. sir, this bag is very precious for me not because of clothes but for my educational certificate which, i kept in this bag. you are literally god for me as you understand how certificates are an important for someone.
I have no words for your kind act but i really regard for you with my whole heart. sir, please come to my house whenever you will visit my city.
with regard
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...aipur for my interview as a programmer. this is my first job offer after completing ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...st job offer after completing my study. i was completely stranger for this city a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...st job offer after completing my study. i was completely stranger for this city a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... know anything about places and people. after boarding i hired a private auto for par...
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Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...about places and people. after boarding i hired a private auto for particular add...
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Suggestion: This
...is auto out of working between the way. this was annoying me because I was already l...
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Suggestion: Immediately
...se I was already late for my interview. immediately i booked an another auto in hurry and f...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...eady late for my interview. immediately i booked an another auto in hurry and for...
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Line 2, column 578, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an auto' or 'another auto'.
Suggestion: an auto; another auto
... for my interview. immediately i booked an another auto in hurry and forgot my bag on previous ...
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Suggestion: When
...urry and forgot my bag on previous one. when i reached office than i realized what h...
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Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...urry and forgot my bag on previous one. when i reached office than i realized what h...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and forgot my bag on previous one. when i reached office than i realized what hap...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...revious one. when i reached office than i realized what happen with me. I was tot...
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Suggestion: But
...ly disappointed and felt dimulative. but by god grace my manager cooperate with ...
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Suggestion: Sir
...my manager cooperate with me and hired. sir, this bag is very precious for me not b...
^^^
Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t for my educational certificate which, i kept in this bag. you are literally god...
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Suggestion: You
... certificate which, i kept in this bag. you are literally god for me as you underst...
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Suggestion: Sir
...lly regard for you with my whole heart. sir, please come to my house whenever you w...
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Suggestion: With
...house whenever you will visit my city. with regard
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, really, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5069124424 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55980724603 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608294930876 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1052556969 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.2 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239763641641 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824583430277 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874415115817 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184197028755 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278882308347 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.