Annual celebration of anniversary or the festival celebration include huge expenditure which is now a days a debateable topic, wheather it is necessary or just a practise which strain the family budget. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explaining why it is neccesary to hold these ceremonies in today's world.
To begin with, social gatherings are important in our day to day life which help in developing and maintaining relations. Hence, these celebrations gives us opportunity to get together. Secondly, it is a best way to show the affection towards our love ones, their importance in our life and the position they hold in our heart.
On flip side, sometimes while organising the reception the budget overshoot the limit and constraint the economic condition. Thus, causing financial burden. Moreover, people fall into the unnecessary competition to prove their superiority over the other by holding them on lavish scale which is of no use to anybody and killing the intent behind it.
Finally, parties are important in social life and bring the families together. We have to keep the watch on the other aspects of bugdet involved in holding them so that it doesnot affect the monetary position of the family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ation include huge expenditure which is now a days a debateable topic, wheather it is nece...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...n include huge expenditure which is now a days a debateable topic, wheather it is nece...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...tunity to get together. Secondly, it is a best way to show the affection towards ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08374384236 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80295133628 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650246305419 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8606920912 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154986682646 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535868825292 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442651261792 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857762898265 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368277199221 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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