Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Currently, cause many studies showed that the number of young parents is on the rise, some experts emphasized that taking parent classes is necessary for both father and mother. In my opinion, I personally agree with this viewpoint as I think that such sessions will be greatly helpful.
There are some compelling reasons to believe that parenting classes are useful and every parent should take part in such classes. To start with, some people maintain that every child has their own personality and parenting classes are impossible to teach parents about how to raise their children in a specific way. However, classes are a place to provide basic knowledge, not a place for counsel. Knowledge from these classes will be basic guidelines for parents and they can use such knowledge in a flexible way to meet their children's development.
Secondly, although there is a natural bond between parents and children but not all parents have enough experience and subtlety to understand how their children feel, lead to the care that does not suit their child's needs. According to a study of the US, understanding between parents and children has a major impact on how well adjusted they become later in life. Parenting classes geared specific ages can really help parents understand their children's mentality and make the parenting style that best suits them.
In conclusion, parent classes bring many benefits to parenting. Since these classes help people in a diverse way, I think it is a good idea for parents to participate in such classes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0862745098 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56044498247 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0491836305 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.909090909 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197785462174 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822417960795 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369948631082 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128094393424 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478813761363 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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