Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, there are many debates about what is the most important factor for success in sport. While some people believe that players should concentrate on physical strength to win a competition, others argue mental strength greatly affects the success. This essay will try to discuss both views of these opinions and express personal thinking.
On the one hand, physical strength is an indispensable factor in sport because almost sports require players with good health. A match can take a long time so individuals need to be fit and enduring to maintain power during the match. For example, in soccer matches, footballers have to run hours in the grass field. If they are exhausted, their competitor can easily be the winner. Moreover, good physical strength help athletes feel more confident so they can perform their abilities in the best way.
On the other hand, strong mental also plays an important role in the successful competition. Many studies have shown that mental health impact a lot on physical. Good mental strength help to release hormones that support for muscle movement, so that player's activities will be more flexible. Besides, mental stamina makes athletes not be distracted by other things, especially in critical moments, helping them to pass the pressure and get better results.
In conclusion, although physical strength is very important in sports, I also believe that mental strength is the prerequisite for players who reach the top of glory. Hard training both physical and mental strength is the key to the success in sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17322834646 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57999007996 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606299212598 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9873970987 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376367078462 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119926222403 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952547804787 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243241334642 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112804979928 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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