Students should pay the full cost of their own university studies, rather than have free higher education provided by the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
These days, the dispute over whether students should pay the full cost of their own tertiary education fee or that tuition fee should be subsidized by the authority has aroused people’s discussion. This is a sophisticated issue and my belief is that post-secondary students should contrive to pay their fee.
It is understandable why some people believe that post-secondary fees should be paid by the government. Academy fundamental’s purposes are to create a new source of employment which will bring prosperity for the country so students should be encouraged to pursue tertiary education by free tuition fees. If there were skyrocketing tuition fees, only affluent members of society could afford to engage in higher education. The implication for this is that the less privileged would be stripped of the opportunity to learn and broaden their horizon in their occupational sectors. Having said that, this argument is flawed, as admission to a prestigious university often contains scholarships for poverty but dedicated students. One case at this point is the University of Pedagogy in Vietnam where students who major in teaching are given a grant that provides them with a free tuition fee.
On the other hand, I believe that students should pay the full cost of their own tertiary education. This can be attributed to the fact that the government does not have sufficient funds to subsidize all students and there are other priorities for taxpayer’s money. The key argument in support of this view is that there are a variety of training curricula that require top-notch and prohibitively costly facilities such as the medical industry and engineering, which correspondingly increase the burden for the country especially developing one. Furthermore, were students to require to pay their own fees, they would value their own budget and, therefore, try their best to ace the test with flying colors.
To recapitulate, while there are reasons to support giving the students free admission to higher education, I would opine the view that it would be better to require a tuition fee from students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
.... Furthermore, were students to require to pay their own fees, they would value their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2389380531 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98535275631 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2596527426 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.615384615 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29134219012 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109554106194 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686979590489 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177959830677 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679163320922 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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