It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendation.
It is true that extended families used to be preferred. However, it is observed nowadays that families are not as supportive as they were in those days. In fact, couples have their own nuclear families or even choose to build a sound financial status rather than have children. This essay will discuss some intrinsic reasons leading to the impairment of family bonds and the solutions to address this problem.
The first major reason is the leisure hours that people especially workaholics spend for their families have exponentially decreased. In the rat race to achieve material prosperity, hardly do people have time with each other since every family member started working in different places. For instance, if both parents are the primary breadwinners, the space left for affection to develop in such a nuclear family could be in greater shortage. Another reason is the addiction to electronic devices that make people become technophile. Despite having leisure time, it is not well spent on the loved ones because of laptops and smartphones. This is because these electronic gadgets have access to the internet which in turn opens ways for social networking sites such as Facebook and Instagram. Therefore, citizens might get hooked and engrossed, and they tend to lose track of time to surf the web, and this could lead to a shortage of time spent with family.
Some viable suggestions are taken to bind the family members together, if everyone decides to be with their family every weekend, it would compensate the time they worked round the clock throughout /θruːˈaʊt/ the week. Therefore, in my opinion, this weekend bonds might even make individuals more emotionally attached to other members of the family and could strengthen their relationship. Another feasible /ˈfiː.zə.bəl/ solution would be organizing family trips at times by which the family bonds could be increased.
To recapitulate, most of the populaces are deprived of time for spending with their families either because of aspiration for materialism or addiction to gadgets. This has made a dramatic change that family members are not as closer to each other as years ago, so it is suggested to spend weekends and go for a trip with the family to strengthen their relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16576086957 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79817819606 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548913043478 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8743788179 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162337482051 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663742133407 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534834795845 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11403539484 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457402268347 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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