You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Hello! I am at the pink of my health and hope you are sailing at the same boat. I am inscribing this letter to apprise you with contemporary issue which has thrilled the entire nation. Sadly, I want to acquaint you in regard the lethal pandemic Corona Virus-19 which reached India last week and is spurting day by day in every nook and corner.
Since Indian is one of the densely populated terrains and this is a communicable ailment, so it has put the entire country in dilemma. As a result, the supremacy has imposed complete lock-down but by ill luck it is not much effective in putting rein at this invasive disease because a million of migrants are still untraceable.
You will be surprised to know that one of my best friends has recently returned from Italy and was isolated from his family due to the suspicious of COVID-19. Thankfully, he was released later on because all his test reports were found to be negative but still he was freeze for couple of days. Hopefully, you will keep distance with others and would not come out of the home and you must obligate the terms and conditions of this global lock-down.
Please take care of yourself and stay fine.
With warm Regards,
Nav puri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64186046512 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47333426145 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655813953488 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8786792281 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0721610622557 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247653971751 0.0766984524023 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021238103849 0.0603063233224 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0333185630715 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205871947831 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.