Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that someone’s culture ad character can be told by their dressing style. There is a wide spread, it would only lead to myriad of concerns in one’s life.In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so, should be rejected.
To commence with, there are plethora of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that person’s tradition, religion and even climate of their living can e inferred. For instance, If person wears turban on his head then it will depict that person belongs to sikhism. Moreover, folks in woollen attires will illustrate that they live in cooler places such as Canada, Australia. Needless to say, all these things stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of excellence and prosperity is concerned.
Furthermore, character cannot be judged with masses’s dressing style. To explain it, one’s habits, way of talking and his or her work tells about the character. Addition to it, many people are attracting towards western culture and they are wearing the western clothes which will not reckon one’s actual culture and characteristics. Also, it is wiping out the culture diversity and threat to one’s own culture. Apart from this, models and actors have to wear brighter clothes while acting , but it will tell their inner appearance or culture.
To conclude, although we can find out about person’s tradition and religion from the style of clothes, one’s characteristics and culture ethics can not be judged from that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14828897338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76488168048 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5059743309 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205695769499 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655593274003 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460978052457 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120425376901 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039973025999 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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