Many foods are shipped from far away.
Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically.
Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
You should write at least 250 words.
A portion of the populace vocalizes that there is an escalation in trend of eating imported foods which is eventually stemming several concerns related to environment and economy. Even though locally grown produce have lack of nutrition, the assets associated with the consumption of local eatables outscores the prejudices as it trims down the carbon footprints and save the economy from collision.
Since some land have peculiar characteristics owing to which they could grow a limited type of food which have trivial amount of nutrition, thus inadequacy of nutrition force the denizens to rely on foreign foods. Seemingly, in the contemporary epoch people are well aware about importance of balanced diet and thus, they are inclined towards imported foods for rich nutrition.
To exemplify, as per the survey carried out by American Health Ministry, in the gone calendar year, intakes of imported fruits such as Kiwi as compared with indigenous fruits has been proliferated due to the high level of vitamins and protein.Locally produced food protect the atmosphere from contamination by reducing the carbon emission and keep the indigenous economy
alive. As local items are not transported from far flung area, thus it decrease the atmospheric pollution of transportation vehicle and cut down the usage of plastic which is used while importing products from overseas. Moreover, the economy which rely on the agriculture, wholly depends upon the trade of domestically produced food, hence local items are lifeline for economy. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact documented by 'The Economics Times' that indigenous food contribute around 75 percent share in the
GDP(Gross Domestic Produce) of India.
In conclusion, although insufficient amount of nutrition would make imported food more favorable, it posses myriads of threats to environment and economy. Thus, the merits of local food overshadow its disadvantage.`
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5067114094 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00985012648 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61744966443 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0543802852 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.1 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156124984062 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676352364832 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258064142851 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743081480346 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445669029812 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 50.2224549098 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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