n some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel
less safe than ever before.
What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
solve it?
Undoubtedly, numbers of heinous crimes are falling but commoners feel unsafe than ever before. Even though widespread usage of technology which commonly convey misleading rumors, still if statutory bodies take stringent actions to curb the spreading of incorrect information.
Since individuals are turning to be techno savvy day by day, they are well informed about news regarding what is happening on this planet. Seemingly, most of times there is always a doubt about the reliability and authenticity of data which generally spreads fabricated news among common souls. Consequently, these fake information instills sense of fear among denizens. Also, it is biased to overlook the fact documented by 'New York Times' that tailored news of malicious criminal activities on social media platforms such as Whatsapp and facebook often creates phobia among American citizenry. Therefore, though government has successfully put a rein on burgeoning felonies, circulation of false information builds up the states of chaos in humans.
The impeccable solution to mitigate this menace is that authorities should implement strict laws to discourage the people while forwarding fake news. Lack of stringent laws endow people to spread false information without considering the repercussions. Thus, rigid rules which leads to harsh penalties and imprisonment would act as a deterrent and as a result, people would be informed reliable information. To exemplify, Canada is pioneer country who have enacted strict legislation in whole country to curb fake information
on social media . Therefore, actions by authorities would stop the people to outspread fake news regarding inhumane activities.
In conclusion, although serious criminal activities are reducing, technology has bombard the public with fabricated news and create the environment of terror. However, I believe that strict actions by regimes to channelize correct information would alleviate the spirits of fear.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, look, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75684931507 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98730945034 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647260273973 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.618552229 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108035127867 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359632619426 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351264857272 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551134994648 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331294230699 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.