Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines.
Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Even though it is considered that guardians should have the sole authorization n regarding immunizations of their offspring to withstand few ubiquitous aliments, still a majority of populace anticipate that this should be legalized without any impedition by parents. Although, I adamantly cogitate that reckless behavior of parents and financial constraint are the two triggers for persuading the supremacy to make vaccination mandatory without the interference of parents.
Since the daily burdensome schedule has proffered lethargic behavior among parents regarding the look-after of their children, thus the complete liability for health progeny relies on the part of government. Sadly, if people are liberalized by the authorities and entitled with right to opt for vaccination, then citizens would tend to forget about the regular checkups and visits at medical amenities. To strongly typify, the fact highlighted by WHO strongly shows overwhelming satisfaction that under the auspices of stringent rules and regulation on the parents about vaccination in the formative ages of children has brought the deadly pandemic named 'Polio' under absolute control in India. Therefore, granting liberty about the immunization would lead to hefty loss in term of healthy citizenry for future society.
On the top of that, financial limitations among parents sometime unintentionally intensify the severity of some general diseases by turning them into chronic epidemic. Unfortunately, the lack of monetary assets compel people to postpone vaccinations, but if government emphasis on making vaccination legal then it would arrange some legitimate resources and free vaccination to children will surely attain its ground. Moreover, it would be unworthy to bypass the incident that paucity of sufficient funds in hands of commoners in Pakistan has turned the Polio into lethal ailment in the country. Hence, while making any vaccination obligatory for public, the authority would definitely arrange some amenities entitled for the treatment at free of charge.
In conclusion, although the democracy verdicts freedom to denizens but still the gesture of mandatory immunization is the only impeccable methodology to put rein on the burgeoning chronic pandemics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76946107784 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06037383084 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619760479042 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7315173169 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.181818182 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3636363636 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17741503991 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570720360217 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048857785863 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0941970378344 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499786189773 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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