Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.
There has been a significant increase in migration of youth from their towns to urban areas in past decades for the purpose of education or job. This essay will discuss how this is more beneficial for a family.
To begin with, with the increase in awareness and ease of mobility due to better transportation infrastructure over the past decades it has become easier for people to travel to cities for studies or for a job. First of all, when a person gets education he has more opportunities to earn money. This will lead to better quality of life of his family. Also when a person moves from a rural area to an urban area, he has better exposure in his field, helping him to become a better professional.
On the other hand, more people moving towards cities results in congestion, pollution and many other issues. For example, more facilities are required for the increasing population in the cities which is difficult for many countries to provide because of lack of resources. Therefore, it puts a huge burden on a countries economy. Although, this issue can be resolved with the help of good economists in the government.
In conclusion, urbanisation has advantages as well as disdavantages but in my opinion migration to cities has more benefits as compared to its' disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92386518214 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9943494802 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7272727273 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.25397266985 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152061629517 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054011058632 0.0925447433944 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352850300474 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951545178418 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209709824277 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.5310837438 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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