In some countries, the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing
rapidly in recent years. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development for
society?
Living alone has been an increasing trend in the last few decades. This has been happening as people cannot afford the cost of a marriage life. This essay will look at both pros and cons of this tendency.
It is clear that majority of people nowadays decide not to marry because they find living with spouse and having children very costly. For instance, the expenses of having a wedding party, booking honey moon or buying a new house to name as a few will apparently go over their budget. If they dont have a decent job that can cover all the spending, their life will be in misery. By analyzing this example, it is more understandable why people choose to live on their own.
Living by oneself will obviously bring about some benefits. Firstly, it seems to me that people will have more privacy thanks to living alone. There are a lot of things that’s not very convenient to do when they share a room with someone such as playing their favorite kind of music loudly or having their pet sleeping on the couch. Secondly, the quality of life will be increased since they are not under financial pressure. The income that make every year will be devoted for merely for their own expenditure. If they live with a wife or husband with children, the cost may be doubled compared to a single life. By looking at the two example of the advantages, it is rather persuadable that people will benefit a great deal from no-marriage life.
On the other hand, it is argued that this trend may cause some negative effects on some people. Physically, people may have some unhealthy life style when they live alone as most human-being scientifically were born a couch potato. By this I mean people will not actively get involved into a physical job unless they are asked to do, and this passive lifestyle may lead to some common health problems especially obesity. The drawback in terms of mentality is that people are less likely to overcome their pressure without the support from someone who really understand them. For example, when breaking up with someone, they may fall into crises and talking to someone can be better remedy for them compared to handling the problem by them self. Finally, for effects given, it is undoubtably that there are some disadvantages of this trend that exist.
In conclusion, the cost of having a marriage life will be the mail the reason behind the idea of living by oneself. As a result, this tendency has created both pros and cons in terms of physical and mental health. although choosing to live a single life is more and more popular, it is argues that the gains may not overweight the losses
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- According to most doctors adults need thirty minutes of physical activity at least five days a week to be healthy However most adults do not get this recommended amount of exercise What can be done to help people get the exercise they need Give examples t 68
- In some countries the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development for society 56
- In some countries the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development for society 56
- In some countries the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development for society 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2167.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67025862069 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4063916311 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515086206897 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3845797795 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2173913043 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1739130435 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82608695652 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227534578765 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776895685894 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601702684494 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141096727172 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046776306512 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.