In some countries, the number of people choosing to live by themselves is increasing rapidly in recent years. Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
In many countries there are more people who like to live alone due to several reasons, and some effects might be caused by this trend.
Many people like to choose to live alone because of many reasons. First, people want to live alone to be able to do what they want without having to worry about other people, which leads to their private and independent life. For example, young people can listen to loud music without disturbing old people. If individuals live with other people, they might feel uncomfortable. Furthermore, since raising a family involves many responsibilities, many people do not want to get married. This allows them to spend time on developing their career. If they are not single, they would be busy to take care of their family members.
However, this trend has negative impacts on themselves and society. Firstly, due to living alone, there is no one taking care of them. As a result, life would be getting hard and they could feel lonely and isolated. For instance, they would have to buy medicines or go to the hospital by themselves when they are sick. Secondly, because the number of marriages decreases, the birth rate would reduce. This negatively affects future workforce. Finally, since more people want to live alone, the demand for housing rises. This lack of accommodations and house prices would increase.
In conclusion, living alone happens because of some reasons, and it might bring many negative effects on both society and individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...many reasons. First, people want to live alone to be able to do what they want wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01209677419 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57038977901 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6584036809 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1176470588 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225413869011 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797526735437 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643077897371 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146831683342 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415140108523 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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