In the future, there will be a higher proportion of older people than younger people. Is it positive or negative development?
These days, longevity of people is increasing due to advancement in health facilities as a result of which the number of senile people is also enhancing as compare to younger people. According to me it is entirely a pessimistic in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, first and the foremost reason of following trend is that the young generation is advance in technology and they have creative ideas to progress, whereas older generation is not able to catch up with this revolution in the technological world. Young minds know have to deal with the odd situation if any, with their innovative ideas which older masses lack. Although, old people have an experience in that realms but for efficiency in every field, innovative is prefered these days.
The second most common reason is the unemployment in the modern world as there is saturation in job faculty for young ones. The older generation is healthy due to better medical immunities and eventually, there is an upsurge in their life span to work therefore the young citizens are not availing job opportunities because older folks are still working in their respective vacations.
To conclude, senility is a good aspect of development in a country but in return youth is suffering in an awful way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...enhancing as compare to younger people. According to me it is entirely a pessimistic in the fol...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an awful way" with adverb for "awful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ountry but in return youth is suffering in an awful way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, whereas, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02369668246 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84077268418 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9145991037 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120638094423 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475166717511 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502417353038 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707537120173 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435215969648 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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