Family
There are four people in my family - my parents, my older brother and I, and we live in Ho Chi Minh City. My father is a doctor at an optic clinic, so he is very busy. He is a little bit short compares to men at his age, and he has a round belly since he has to sit all day to examine his patients. He has short curly black hair which he always keeps tidy. Every morning, he leaves home at 6.45 AM after having breakfast with the whole family, but sometimes he leaves earlier without eating anything. My mother is a History teacher at a secondary school, and she does not have to work for such long hours like my father. She is taller and thinner than him, and she usually make her hair into braid whenever she has to go to school. My mother is not only a good teacher, but she is also an excellent cook in our house. She always spend a little of time in the morning to cook delicious breakfast for everyone, and both my brother and I have beautiful lunch boxes to take to school. My older brother studies at the same high school as me. He is in grade 12, and I am in grade 10. He is a tall boy with curly black hair as my father, and he has a thin body like my mother. Every morning, he takes me to school on his bike, and I always waits for him to take me back home after we finish our classes. Because I am the youngest one, I get a lot of love from the whole family. I love them a lot, and I hope we can forever be happy like this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...tic clinic, so he is very busy. He is a little bit short compares to men at his age, and h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 674, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...r and thinner than him, and she usually make her hair into braid whenever she has to...
^^^^
Line 1, column 830, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...excellent cook in our house. She always spend a little of time in the morning to cook...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 1234, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'wait'
Suggestion: wait
... me to school on his bike, and I always waits for him to take me back home after we f...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 5.60731707317 945% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 293.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.8976109215 4.92477711251 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03712818669 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 1.53170731707 979% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 0.482926829268 2278% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2750462635 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0279397715448 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104747969381 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391931013385 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0279397715448 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.2329268293 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.34 11.4140731707 47% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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