The Internet has transformed lives and economies but it turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?.
It is widely known that the emergence of the state-of-the-art technology, particulary the internet has altered both lives and economies in human’ life. Individuals will inevitably own the same perspective and behaviour soon. Personally, I agree that such alteration will take place and make people behave and think alike.
Firs and foremost, there is no doubt that the internet has encouraged people to behave in the same way. This is as a result of utilizing of internet in their daily basis. Blogger and youtuber, for instance, use the internet for the sake of telling about their daily life, journeys and even relationship. It is undeniable that only after they convey their daily activities on social media, would the others imitate such activities immediately.
Another consideration would be the change of people’ thought. In this fast-changing digital era, it is undoubtful that people could obtain a great deal of information effortlessly. This is mainly because the fresh article and newspaper would be shared quickly without barriers of time and place. However, the faster societies spread the information, the more difficult they distinct wheather such information would be original or not. As a result of this situation, people tend to gain the similar opinion and idea leading to have the same perspective.
In conclusion, I believe that the availabilty of the internet in this present time will change how individuals think and behave inevitably. This is mainly because the utilization of this technologal advence in human’ daily basis and the speed of information exchange taking place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37804878049 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99839393412 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.641708133 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192042914806 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680867849744 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05297173473 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122346848825 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529903298657 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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