The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
In this day and age, the existence of the Internet system has dramatically changed people’s lives and their economic conditions and turned the world into a global environment. One school of thought argues that the proliferation of the Internet is the main reason explaining why persons have the tendency to think and behave in a similar way. From my perspective, I opine that this statement is only true in some fields due to there are other reasons causing this issue related to people’s thinking and acting.
On the one hand, there are a vast majority of changes from the ubiquity of the Internet that are particularly done in living and economic areas. It can be seen that the Internet has promoted the new way of communication, which is the virtual environment. As many high-tech gadgets are ubiquitous such as Facebook and Instagram, it is developing video call systems by accessing the Internet, and as a result, many people can have a gathering with their family members without geographical boundaries via the Internet, especially for those who are living apart from their families. Moreover, it is not only convenient for people to have a video call but also a great tool to start business by selling products on the online spaces. There are many sellers succeeding with their career path from releasing their products on Internet websites and eventually, they can gain various profits because of the increasing rate of customers’ demands. This aforementioned information is promoting the positive aspect of the Internet with the changes in lives and economies.
On the other hand, notwithstanding the globally changes in the living and financial conditions, there are various issues that people think and act in distinct ways. On the Internet nowadays, a number of shocking quotes and misleading information are widely spoken among the society, whereas, especially students with a highly-educated system can be taught and expressed their own opinions with this phenomenon in different ways. Furthermore, there are many virtual debate competitions for children to express their thinking about this topic and maybe it generates relevant skills of debating and showing their own ideas. So that is the reason why the Internet will only change in some specific fields not for all areas and nobody will act and think in the same way.
In conclusion, the effect of using the Internet in lives and economics has made people become a version of others, in stark contrast, there are those who are trying to be themselves and never being mingled with the preconception of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1391509434 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8502892732 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.8006269727 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.642857143 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225006245231 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853230188042 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501164232071 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14048895421 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564317071846 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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