Write a letter to your friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damaged.
1. Apologize for damaging the product.
2. Explain what happened.
3. Say how are you going to fix the issue.
Dear John,
I wanted to just let you know that I haven’t forgotten to return your travelling bag that I had borrowed last week for my travel. I am actually writing to apologize for the delay and explain the reason for it.
I am sorry to say that the bag got slightly damaged on my way back from the airport. I know you really love the bag and it was a reminder of the wonderful time you had last year during your trip to Miami.
It isn’t anything major, but there were some scratches on the corner and one of the screws on the handle came undone. As I was exiting the airport, staff carrying the passenger luggage's on one of those big trolleys hit me from behind and the bag got hit.
I have already talked to the local bag shop and he has ensured me that they can fix the screw and polish the bag and it should be looking like new. I should have it back within couple of days, and will bring it back myself.
Once again, I apologize for the unfortunate accident and hope to make it up to you once we are together.
Take care,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...delay and explain the reason for it. I am sorry to say that the bag got slight...
^
Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...amaged on my way back from the airport. I know you really love the bag and it was...
^
Line 15, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are together. Take care, John Doe
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26108374384 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14179805094 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8564783993 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226568663308 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763365633351 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583463133075 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114848300327 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733272464968 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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