University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Does this have more advantages or disadvantages?
Many universities students routinely study and learn in different countries during their course tenure. Although studying abroad will help students to cope up with cultural differences, they have to pay through the nose for the same. In my opinion, students are far better off having studied in a different country despite the challenges that they will inevitably face.
Since it is the era of globalization, it is good to have cultural awareness in people. If students have exposure of different cultures, it will be better for them to work in different environment and with different people, as it has become the need of the hour because of the globalization. Nowadays, every company is becoming multinational and they keep on exchanging employees from one location to another. If people have prior experience of living abroad, it will be beneficial for them to relocate and adjust easily. Hence it is important to have foreign exposure during studies itself.
Despite being beneficial for their future, it will cost them huge money to study abroad. Because of the economy differences, it is very costly to move out of country. Loans are the only option for the parents, but it will create unnecessary pressure on the student and sometime also hamper their studies. In recent reports and news articles, education loans are becoming major cause of depression and suicide attempts in students. Therefore, cost of living and studying in to different country is a major disadvantage of moving out of the country.
Student’s preference in opting university is changing now days. They prefer foreign degree over national. I my view, sending children to other country for their university education will give them lot of exposure and learning opportunities. Which will outweighs few smaller disadvantages like managing finances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27054794521 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88224150629 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0016365485 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5294117647 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252503383824 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858490120549 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687482206799 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163468594521 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687201871182 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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