Write a letter to your manager complaining about the parking situation at work.
In your letter, you should:
describe the problems are
explain why should solve the problems
suggest how to solve the problems.
Dear Manager,
I, Ashik k, is part of your sales team. I wanted to raise a concern regarding the parking lot in our company. Even though we have our own parking space, due to the lack of proper management of the parking space, few of us are often forced to park our vehicles outside the premises of company.
One of the main issues is that, the people are not utilising the parking space effectively. The disorganised way of parking takes up a lot of space, which otherwise planned properly can accommodate more vehicles in the parking space. As I mentioned earlier due to this, we are forced to park outside and this is causing damage to our vehicles. Most of the time we end up getting a scratch on our automobiles. Other than that, now officials has made the law stringent for parking the vehicles outside. So this need to be taken into consideration as a priority in the official meeting and a solution must be provided.
I don't think we would require more parking space. But I would suggest modifying the existing parking area with proper marking for parking the automobiles. Subsequently, it would be better to place a security guard in the parking area to make sure that the people are following the markings and parking their vehicle in an organised manner. Please consider this as a priority and take the necessary actions.
Thanks and Regards,
Ashik Kelat
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur own parking space, due to the lack of proper management of the parking space, ...
^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omobiles. Other than that, now officials has made the law stringent for parking t...
^^
Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ing and a solution must be provided. I dont think we would require more parking spa...
^^^^
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r parking the automobiles. Subsequently, it would be better to place a security g...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62571418856 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.378735018 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778219717016 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289689890407 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236075770188 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614024429174 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179937301414 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur own parking space, due to the lack of proper management of the parking space, ...
^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...omobiles. Other than that, now officials has made the law stringent for parking t...
^^
Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ing and a solution must be provided. I dont think we would require more parking spa...
^^^^
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r parking the automobiles. Subsequently, it would be better to place a security g...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62571418856 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.378735018 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778219717016 0.216113520407 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289689890407 0.0766984524023 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236075770188 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614024429174 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179937301414 0.0580467560999 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.