Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant that closes to your house to complain about noise In your letter you should state what the problem tell why you are disturbed suggest how to solve the problem

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Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant that closes to your house to complain about noise.
In your letter, you should:
state what the problem
tell why you are disturbed
suggest how to solve the problem.

Respected Sir,

I, Ashik K, is the resident of the Varuna flat which is located opposite to your restaurant. I am writing this letter to raise a concern about the increased noice from your restaurant during night time.

I am very sorry to let you know that the sound from your restaurant is causing much issue for the residents here. Especially the late night DJ, most of the residents in the flat are IT employees and we prefer to have a peaceful night. Nowadays your restaurant is hosting DJ's on almost everyday and it's getting extended till 1 to 2 in the morning. The residents of the flat are very concerned about this. So we had a meeting and decided to inform you about the hardship we face.

We had an internal discussion to have a solution for this problem. Even though we are impacted by the DJ show's in your restaurant, we don't want you to stop the show. But we request you to restrict the timing to a maximum of 11 PM. So that we are able to rest properly and won't cause you any customers lose. So I hope, you would do the needful and expecting a positive response from your end.

Thanks and Regards,
Ashik Kelat

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the increased noice from your restaurant during night time. I am very sorry to...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your restaurant during night time. I am very sorry to let you know that the ...
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...our restaurant is hosting DJs on almost everyday and its getting extended till 1 to 2 in...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... by the DJ shows in your restaurant, we dont want you to stop the show. But we reque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41904761905 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42277553022 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590476190476 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0136514002 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3846153846 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.30769230769 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213694728562 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735928259744 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049037385117 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155364845564 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221223509348 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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