IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - THE RESPONSIBILY OF GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS
There is a common belief that governments and corporations are the only organizations that can enhance the environment, and individuals do not have responsibility for it. I reckon that all of them have contributed to the improvement of our environment, so I do disagree with the one-sided belief mentioned.
Firstly, powerful corporations could build a green space surrounding their workplaces, providing the employees with fresh air as well as cutting off the amount of electricity consumed monthly. However, we can not deny the significant roles of individuals in preserving the habitat. They are gradually aware of the importance of the environment, which leads them to grow more and more plants as the way that big companies do. For example, citizens in Singapore are taking advantage of their roofs to grow vegetables that could clean the air and provide them with food as well.
Secondly, not only do governments have the ability to solve the problems related to our environment, but also individuals could take action to do it. They hardly improve the environment on their own without the help of their citizens since there is no point for governments to enact a rule that is not followed by individuals. For example, although the government in Vietnam has allocated a load of money to improve the environment, there is still a lot of waste plastic and litter which are thrown away in public areas.
In conclusion, although governments and powerful corporations have a larger responsibility for preserving the habitat, nobody can deny the significant roles of individuals. We need to join together in the fight against pollution to conserve our habitat, regardless of governments, powerful companies, or individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, i reckon, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18414008193 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523465703971 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 28.6494919402 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 132.363636364 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930155071932 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407353577268 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426896618687 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604903172359 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337945776949 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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