Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this competitive world, children’s achievements have become particular important to fit this world. As being a talented people becomes extremely crucial, more parents begin participating their children’s education. Whereas with the development of the economy, it is hard for parents to balance between kids and work. For my perspective, more parents will choose their kids.
Different from the past, which is agriculture-oriented that parents focused more on how to teach their kids to cultivate the plants. Some parents even don’t let their children go to school, instead teaching their how to farm. And the past use to be a labor intensive society, and each families have almost 3 to 6 children, even they had ability to afford the school fees, they didn’t have the time to involve in their children’s education. Quite the opposite, it is the intelligence-oriented society now, which all of the parents are hoping their children can achieve a conspicuous feat. In this case, they are likely to put more attentions on their children rather than anything else. It is the greatest wish of parents for their children to get ahead in the job market, and they are willing to give up everything besides the children’s future.
More and more schools assign the children’s homework includes the participation of parents, such as handwork, parents’ signature after completing the homework and a sort of these things. For those parents who are always busy with their work, they have to get involved. More interactions between children and parents can inspire children’s study, because kids always want to do some amazing things and show their parents with the purpose of deriving some praises. Thus parents also can feel a sense of proud because of their smart kids. In most countries, parents always like showing off how great their kids are. Due to parents don’t want their kids are less smarter than others, they will pay more attentions on their children. As a results, parents want their children grasp all kinds of skills, in this case, children will have all different after-classes, like piano classes, physic classes and so on.
Admittedly, in order to afford the high school fees, parents have to work out. So they don’t have enough time spent with their kids and less opportunity to get involved in their children’s study. Most of the schools recently are full-time which students are supposed to stay at school all day, even for a week. Moreover, as the trenmdous development of society and the different overall knowledge and integrate conception, parents are not able to sovle the questions appeared in their study. Whether involving in their chidren’s education is not a big deal. With the updated knowedge, children can better study at school rather than stay at home with their parents. According to a statistic, almost 84 percent of parents choose to sent their children in the full-time school. Thus less participating of parents can better for their kids’ studying.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
...eaching their how to farm. And the past use to be a labor intensive society, and ea...
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Suggestion: all the
...ntelligence-oriented society now, which all of the parents are hoping their children can a...
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Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less smart'?
Suggestion: less smart
...ue to parents don’t want their kids are less smarter than others, they will pay more attenti...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...y more attentions on their children. As a results, parents want their children grasp all ...
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the questions appeared in their study. Whether involving in their chidren’s education ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...their children in the full-time school. Thus less participating of parents can bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14489795918 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84295676459 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477551020408 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.826932359 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.84 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347821965092 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126305264048 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499772454406 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248820796147 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440680848963 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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