You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
explain why you changed jobs
describe your new job
tell him/her your other news
Dear Tom
I’m just writing to let you know I quit my old job and found something new.
I was really fed up with being a brain surgeon because it wasn’t really much of a challenge anymore. You know me; if I’m not learning new tricks, I get bored too easily and have to find something new.
I’m now teaching English as a foreign language in Vietnam and it suits me down to the ground. I teach two adult classes and a kindergarten class, which is not only challenging but also rewarding too. Can you believe it?
I also have some other amazing news- I’m getting married. She was one of my first ever students and I guess it was love at first sight for both of us. Make sure you keep the first weekend in July free, so you can come and celebrate with us.
Keep in touch
Chris
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| 2023-01-21 | ielts_tony | 73 | view |
| 2022-02-05 | lakhveer khokhar | 78 | view |
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- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it as a good thing while others disagree Give your opinion and discuss both the views 61
- Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some educational systems make students study specialized subjects from the age of fifteen while others require students to study a wide range Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 89
- some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with colleague 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...agree with former one and in this essay i will discuss both views. To begin with...
^
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...our. Firstly, if companies sponsoring a sports event, it will grow the reputation of t...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'take' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'takes'.
Suggestion: takes
...panies were spending more than 300 core take to promote their products. Last but not...
^^^^
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to the business but also its brand. However, there are some inevitable drawb...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'will' requires base form of the verb: 'spoil'
Suggestion: spoil
...of taking any alcohol, it will not only spoiling the status of the participant but also ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, as to, such as, to begin with, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70768725076 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1915819561 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164436091315 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516802975881 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532875474729 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972657427395 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776665426866 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.