A university education is necessary to succeed in a career, to what extent to you agree or disagree?
Since past century focus on education have tremendously increased even in poorer countries. Some people believe that graduation is pertinent to be successful in the field while others disagree. This essay will discuss that how can a person be successful in life despite not having a degree.
To begin with, success is determined by the attitude of a person rather than a degree. Having determination to work hard and obtaining required skills in any field is the prerequisite of a successful person. For example, Mark Zucherberg, owner of facebook was a college dropout but with his passion he has achieved so much in life at a very young age. Clearly, it shows that university education is not mandatory for success.
Also, there are many professions where education does not play any part. These professions might require attributes such as physical and mental fitness. For example, any sportsmen including footballer, cricketer and others require to be physically and mentally fit to be at their best in respective professions. Therefore, in these fields education does not play any significant role.
In conclusion, success in any field requires a positive attitude and necessary skills including technical or related to health. In my opinion, university education is not the requirement to have a successful career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since past century focus on education have tr...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'fields'' or 'field's'?
Suggestion: fields'; field's
...ective professions. Therefore, in these fields education does not play any significant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30331753555 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99223706049 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630331753555 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0911238985 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899525664721 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423866918884 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608645661344 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643529435864 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492744362455 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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