Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Write a response to the prompt in which you discuss whether or not you agree or disagree. Be certain to fully develop your position and carefully consider ways in which your position could be challenged.
Science and technology has been on one of the forefronts of makind's evolution in terms of growth and future sustainaibility and would probably be at it's forefront for the foreseeable future. It has solved various problems, today seen mundane, were at times groundbreaking. Let's have a look at few of them.
Most of the people affiliate Science and technology with the experiments, rocket science and whatnot. Speaking of rocket science, the field of science and technology has led us into the dwelves of what we know as space. At a time, though unassailabe, and even thought of only a dream, innovations in science and technology has led the mankind to space and setting foot on the moon. Now, due to major advancements in science and technology taken from that one daring step has led to various discoveries such as nuclear fusion, existance of different planets and universe and would encourage the mankind to persevere even more.
Science and technology has helped immensly in the field of medical. Initially thought to be cured by a chosen few, now, due to advancement in drug manufacturing, immense information cultivated over decades by the use of technology, people are now able to cured from diseases like Malaria, which few decades ago was almost incurable, with ease. Once diseases were thought to be only happening to those who do not deserve to live was downplayed by science itself. The mortality rates have decreased exponentially and with these advancements continuing, that time might come close when there will truly be a panacea medicine.
One of the most important discoveries had been done due to advancements in science and technology: Electricity. Electricity has paved way for most of us to the living standard that we are so accustomed to. Since, the discovery of electricity , the world has mostly advanced forward. Even the above two distinct field had an exponential rise because of electricity. From low earning wage family to highly entitled families, electricity has solved the biggesrt problem faced by everyone early one i.e. darkness. Now, due to electricity, no night is actually dark. In fact, many people are now not afraid because of it. And all thanks to science and technology.
If we look at all the above instances, we could clearly see that science and technology has caused an advancement in evolution in almost every aspect that we currently have right now, even socially. Even in current times, we are very much dependent on it to develop, nurture and grow all of our ideas in our minds, whether directly or indirectly. So, to say that Science and Technology would be able to solve all of society's problems one day is not an understatement, and it might possibly do it like it has solved other problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
... mundane, were at times groundbreaking. Lets have a look at few of them. Most of ...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es ago was almost incurable, with ease. Once diseases were thought to be only happen...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to. Since, the discovery of electricity , the world has mostly advanced forward. ...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'field' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'fields'.
Suggestion: fields
...ed forward. Even the above two distinct field had an exponential rise because of elec...
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Line 9, column 476, Rule ID: MIGHT_PERHAPS[1]
Message: Use simply 'might', 'possibly'.
Suggestion: might; possibly
...ne day is not an understatement, and it might possibly do it like it has solved other problems...
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Line 9, column 476, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'might'.
Suggestion: might
...ne day is not an understatement, and it might possibly do it like it has solved other problems...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, even so, in fact, speaking of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2300.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90636349621 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523913043478 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1227032679 60.3974514979 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.545454545 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18589410379 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052582686897 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051263060272 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102200766306 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386821912033 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.