As parts of education, students should spend a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Language is becoming a compulsory subject in school due to the integration over the world. Some people say that students should study abroad for a short period of time to increase their language skill and know more about others culture. Others people claim that that idea is not good for some reasons. From my point of view, I agree with the statement that learning in other countries for a while will help students develop their language skill.
Study abroad with a short period of time has been existed for a long time which is known as student exchange program in many high schools and colleges and it brings a large benefit. Firstly, student will have more chances to communicate with native speakers in term of earning a worthy amount of language knowledge. Study at other country will force student to speak and hear that language and they will obtain decent amount of words with fast react and corrected intonation. For instance, studying in England will help people improve their English skill due to England is considered a place where English invented. Students will gain a feasible amount of English skill and it will help them how to use English words in each specific sceneries. Secondly, they will acquire more about the others' culture. They will be taught through the society about what the residents have done every day, traditions and environment. It brings the advantages that they will have the adaptable ability when working multinational companies.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to this idea. One of that is it will cost a noticeably amount of money. If people do not have a plan correctly, they will waste their time and money. Moreover, with a short amount of time, they will suffer from a culture shock. They will struggle in living with native people and study process could be ineffective compare to study foreign language in their mother land.
In conclusion, although there are some negative perspectives such as wasting money and hard to adapt with culture, spending a period of time living in another country to learn its language and culture will gain massive advantages to students if they have a proper plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9043715847 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41489407603 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5809487632 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18706087128 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617348723758 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721049495486 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153044230786 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846966705201 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.