most of the elderly retired peoples moving to an other countries discuss the advantage and disadvantage .
Gone are the days when elderly were reliable on the young family members.This scenario has undergone the sea changes.In this contemporary era senior citizens are moving to abroad after their retirement.This situation has various pros and cons.This essay will elucidates both prospective an ensuing segments.
First and foremost,senior citizens are moving to an other countries.Owing to this, they get a chance to do more work which is not possible int their native country.As their surplus experience it make them experts in their field.which helpful to get job in the another country.To be more precise,They gain sufficient income to survive in life as well as they are contributing to enhance the economy of residential nation.In 2019 for instances, airline travel history data shown that 70%elder people travel abroad every year.Hence senior citizen and residential country both getting benefit with this approach.Secondly,This is helpful for them to reduce their stress and health issue.which create after retirement in loneliness and lackness of suitable company. Due to busy schedule they spend their time on work and they escape from stress and anxiety.Which is beneficial for their health issues.Consequently,it gave positive influence their healthy life .
However,It has some con's firstly,native government faced lackness of experienced person who are able to train the youngsters for their work field.They also felt trouble to tackle social problem like home violence.Which reduced in the presence of senior citizen in the family.Last but not least, native country faced mance of people growth and guidance.Not only this, moral value also exist with the presence of elderly without elder the moral value also going to reduce in the society.
To recapitulate,I vehemmethy voch that although, going to other nation after retirement has various married for individual yet there are numerous demerits for nation growth and the holistic growth of the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58193979933 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21788577934 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605351170569 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.442771318 49.4020404114 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.8 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.8 20.7667163134 288% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 7.06120827912 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126761847245 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637540958546 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352638639411 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739702847264 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00814452635899 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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