Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?
Shopping behaviour of people has drastically changed in recent times. There are indeed numerous reasons why high street shops are at brink of closure, and why more and more people are preferring to shop using other mediums. This essay will dilate the potential reasons for this shift before outlining a reasonable and logical conclusion.
Beyond any qualms, there are ample justifications why small shops are running out of businesses. First and foremost, big shopping malls are replacing small shops. It mostly entails, people can get everything easily by going to a shopping center which includes small things like a needle to big things like a car. To substantiate, according to a most-cited survey, buying things from the shopping complex has become much more convenient because of various things present at such places like various shops, food court, kid's playing area, and many more. Therefore, it is quite eloquent that people prefer to shop from a single shopping mall.
Additionally, there are immense other factors behind this change that are eradicating the small shops. Indubitably, technology has proved to be another preponderant cause behind the downfall of shops. Online shopping is favored by many people, as it offers them a lot of options including but not limited to, easy returns, exchanges, and refunds of the items purchased. To exemplify, AfterPay is an option available to most of the online shoppers to buy the product and allow them to pay later, which makes shopping even more easier and popular. Hence, it is apparent that when people have so many options available sitting at home, why they will go to a shop and buy from there.
To conclude, it is true that small shops are closing and there are several reasons that contribute to this phenomenon. Although, I staunchly believe it is a negative trend making difficult for a lot of people to survive in this cut-throat competition, however, better services and options provided by shopping malls and online businesses has changed the buying behaviour of denizens. Will people understand the importance of small shops or will such shops be completely removed from the market? This remains a debatable question that needs careful deliberation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...f closure, and why more and more people are preferring to shop using other mediums. This essay...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...to pay later, which makes shopping even more easier and popular. Hence, it is apparent that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18559556787 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68535519276 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554016620499 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0519729273 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.117647059 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197113008728 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669144035788 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03998691397 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127125803847 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032722562822 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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